ACHING FOR LIFE

                                  Settling reality
                   meadows mean nothing lately
                        loneliness hurts!

                                  air so void
                     without your scent!
                          now it hurts!!! 
       
                                              
     Loneliness is the most fatal disease I have faced so far and mostly fatal when the you are addicted to that person...   People who occupy a major part of my heart are away always from me...
the emptiness which makes your heart ache and tear down into bits! the new morning willing to rise only if they are around...  surrounding dark and still hoping to find light.. still waiting for them to come...
 
Time and again I have dealt with it and so far haven't a cure for it... Hope there is some..! :(

The haiku was written for September challenge by HAIKU HEIGHTS and the prompt today is "LONELINESS!"
                         

Comments

  1. A Hopeless Romantic2 September 2012 at 23:33

    Factual indeed,
    Loneliness hurts!

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  2. Susan Daniels2 September 2012 at 23:46

    ouch! I feel you. Well done, and (((hugs)))

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  3. Mark2 September 2012 at 23:52

    Your words convey pain painfully well!

    Loneliness of Stars

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  4. Amrit Sinha3 September 2012 at 00:37

    Amazing depiction of pain !!!

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  5. Ghadeer3 September 2012 at 01:23

    Sometimes I don't mind loneliness- I quite enjoy my own company.

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  6. Unknown3 September 2012 at 02:28

    I felt the pain vividly while reading your haiku.

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  7. Diwakar Narayan3 September 2012 at 02:45

    without your scent! Ah..so lovely :-)

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  8. Hazel3 September 2012 at 08:26

    Loneliness hurts - I'm with you there. I'm just probably good at hiding it.

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  9. Sri Valli3 September 2012 at 18:28

    Beautiful set...Air so void without your scent......beautiful line.....Lovely haiku!
    Lonely girl

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  10. Unknown3 September 2012 at 19:03

    Oh wow - the "without your scent" line really evoked emotions for me. Well done.

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  11. Chèvrefeuille3 September 2012 at 20:38

    That's so true ... loneliness can hurt, but ... loneliness can be soothing too.

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  12. Anonymous3 September 2012 at 22:55

    ...but the meadows will grow again, and fill the air with the scent of flowers, and the world will fill with others...See - you have drawn me in with your words!

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