PRICE OF WISDOM...

                                  ACHES SHAKE MY TASTE BUDS!
                                PRICELESS! ABSOLUTE JAW GAIN, :)
                                      UPSURGED WISDOM TOOTH!!

I was very excited always about the fact of wisdom tooth's arrival :) when suddenly now they have started erupting I realize there's alot of pain.. Surely NO pain No gain :)


                                       WITH AGE COMES WISDOM
                           LESSONS LEARNT FROM LIFE, SCENIC!
                                  AMEND US MANY WAYS :)

A famous saying yet so true how ever immature a person looks like it just a way he or she might have accepted the trails of life.. Change is the constant thing, life gifts us every now and then.. :)  

The above haiku are written for HAIKU HEIGHTS the prompt this  week is WISDOM

Comments

  1. Rita Odeh16 June 2012 at 16:08

    Your take on the theme of wisdom in the first poem is interesting. Frankly, the tooth of wisdom didn't occur to me:)). I thought of the inner wisdom gained through observing nature which you called:(LESSONS LEARNT FROM LIFE, SCENIC!). I like the philosophic touch in your poems and in the blog as a whole, especially the statement:(I AM BORN TO RULE AND NOT TO BE RULED).

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    1. NAWAL16 June 2012 at 19:03

      Thanks rita :) wisdom tooth were my obsession till last year when I used to think all my childish looks will vanish into thin air once they arrive.. (nothing as such happen :D)

      My statement is because I feel I have my own space or world in this universe and have the ability to rule either way I like :)

      Thanks again :)

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  2. Magical Mystical Teacher16 June 2012 at 16:16

    "With age comes wisdom"

    Sometimes. Sometimes not. I've met some very foolish old people in my day...

    Gathering Wisdom

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    1. NAWAL16 June 2012 at 18:59

      I am sure those are rare cases :)

      Thanks for sharing! :)

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  3. Tarang Sinha16 June 2012 at 16:21

    @ Maharukh: Nice take on the prompt!:)

    @ MMT: :)

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  4. carol l mckenna16 June 2012 at 16:56

    Interesting take on prompt and rather reflective too. ~thanks, ^_^ (A Creative Harbor)

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    1. NAWAL16 June 2012 at 19:00

      You are welcome Carol :)
      glad you liked it :)

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  5. Ghadeer16 June 2012 at 19:52

    Argh, wisdom teeth can be very painful! I had one growing the wrong way a few months ago and the pain distracted me from everything. Couldn't even focus on revision for my exams.

    I guess it is figurative in a way- that no wisdom comes without a price :)

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    1. NAWAL16 June 2012 at 23:55

      luckily for me jnana it didn't grew in the opposite direction but stops every time then starts to grow after two three months.. that's soo irritating! and if god forbid by mistake I eat from that tooth side its the end of world type pain!

      I truly can understand your feelings.. :)

      Thanks for sharing :)

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  6. joanne16 June 2012 at 20:29

    wisdom teeth? great take on prompt....your second haiku - I agree that wisdom CAN come with age espec. if one learns from experience...well-done

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    1. NAWAL16 June 2012 at 23:56

      Definitely Joanne nothing happens if we don't want it to happen :)

      Thanks Joanne :)

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  7. Grace16 June 2012 at 21:07

    I like the use of wisdom tooth ~ Cheers ~

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  8. Judith Westerfield17 June 2012 at 07:10

    Love the upsurged wisdom tooth -- thanks for the painless smile

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  9. Jaideep Rao17 June 2012 at 16:00

    Thats well said, second haiku did the trick, yeah, it comes with age, wisdom, sounds serious right ;),but when it comes be as you are sis :)

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    1. NAWAL18 June 2012 at 15:43

      A lil trait of varieties in my personality with time is all I will gain and my character my ideologies will all remain same :)

      Thanks bro for the lovely comment :)

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  10. N.S.Kirti18 June 2012 at 15:41

    Hehe. congos over the wisdom tooth :P was pleasantly surprised to see such a different take on wisdom :)
    and yes... the lessons we learn in life do make us a bit more wiser :)

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    1. NAWAL18 June 2012 at 15:44

      Thank you kirti :)
      They have started erupting and thats what struck me first when I saw the prompt :)

      Glad you liked it :)

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  11. rallentanda18 June 2012 at 16:01

    Why are they called wisdom teeth? Oh now you have me worrying:)

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    1. NAWAL22 June 2012 at 16:49

      Rallentanda, they are Wisdom teeth cause they erupt after 16 where immaturity starts usually decreasing and people start becoming wiser :)

      Dont you worry Just wear your best smile :)

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  12. Sri Valli18 June 2012 at 16:40

    Lovely take on the prompt....Wisdom comes with experiences faced in life....Very true and beautiful haiku!

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  13. Jim18 June 2012 at 17:55

    Very nice take on the prompt, MAHARUKH. Most of us are thinking only learned wisdom but you included the teeth which are associated with having wisdom. And added some humor. Thank you.
    ..
    BTW, I have one wisdom tooth that has never surfaced. The dentistis say just to leave it be there, buried. The others have been pulled when they began to decay.
    ..

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    1. NAWAL22 June 2012 at 16:50

      Thank you Jim :)

      That sounds really painful mine erupt then pause then erupt its the same case from last three months now :)

      Thanks for sharing :)

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  14. Locomente20 June 2012 at 15:17

    Thats wisdom tooth part was real good..
    I hv nt yet gotten one...
    Though i am nt very ready to endure the pain

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    1. NAWAL22 June 2012 at 16:51

      time teaches us everything :)

      good luck and thanks :)

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  15. Tarun Mazumdar21 June 2012 at 10:57

    my wisdom tooth came this month and damn it hurts! lovely haiku set...
    I like the second one.. age teaches us a lot...

    http://chaigaramchai.blogspot.in/2012/06/wisdom-haiku-june-18-2012.html

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    1. NAWAL22 June 2012 at 16:51

      Mine is still hurting Tarun :)

      thanks for your stay :)

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  16. Anu ~*~22 June 2012 at 19:47

    OHHHHHHH ...Price of widomm ..
    .. Good one Maharuth :)

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  17. Ruchi Jain22 June 2012 at 20:38

    wisdom come with time,, and experiences teaches us alot..:)

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  18. Suzy23 June 2012 at 16:16

    Ouch, your wisdom tooth took me back in time to mine.

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  19. Mr. Walker24 June 2012 at 20:31

    I like your two takes on wisdom. And I agree that wisdom can "amend us many ways".

    Richard

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  20. Junaid shadab24 June 2012 at 22:23

    It has both wisdom tooth and the general wisdom nice way to write

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