MOMENT I SEE YOU :)

heart exults,
tears run along cheek,
endless bliss!!

engulf me
in your ardor, her
eyes twinkled!!!


can he span again???
hearts still held the immortal
love for each other..

commiseration,
at-last found supreme rest in
your perfect embrace!

teary,joyous eyes
pray with out a sound, to LOCK
moments forever!


Lock away the sorrow,
which dwelled in secluded times,
Lock souls in love now.

lock away,
loneliness is over
only love now!

lock now, the
moments we held composed...
lets freeze it!

he said nothing yet
she understood, memories spun
in single moment...

LOCKED FOR LIFETIME!!!!

P.S- tooo huggilicious today :9 missing my dear friends my best friends alot whose hugs are the safest place for me :) If you are reading this I am sure you can understand it :) LOVE YOU ALL :*:* 

P.P.S- This set of haiku, which are my longest till date were written for haiku heights, the promt given this week was LOCK !:)

Comments

  1. Vinay Leo R.2 June 2012 at 18:07

    Interesting set of haiku.. I personally prefer one or two that stand on their own, and express beautifully :)

    I found that one in your set:

    lock away,
    loneliness is over
    only love now!

    That's quite expressive and could mean either a kiss or a hug.. the former romantic, and the latter could be any kind of love.. :)

    Thanks for sharing!

    P.S: Please could you disable the word verification? It's a turn-off when people come to comment. :)

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    1. NAWAL2 June 2012 at 18:15

      thanks leo :):)

      well i wanted people to have their own imagination when they read this :) thanks again ur comments are mostly scary to me as i feel as verdicts gonna pass :D :D
      YOU ARE WELCOMED ANYHOW :)

      yes surely i will turn it off..

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  2. carol l mckenna2 June 2012 at 19:19

    Wonderful set of 'love' haiku ~ your spirit overflows with love ~ thanks, ^_^

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    1. NAWAL2 June 2012 at 19:53

      :) :) :) thank u carol :)
      glad you enjoyed them!

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  3. anthonynorth2 June 2012 at 19:41

    Great haiku. Enjoyed them.

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  4. joanne2 June 2012 at 19:48

    Through your haiku and photo, I feel you are open and enthusiastic and loving....I like it!

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    1. NAWAL2 June 2012 at 19:54

      You guessed it right joanne.. :)
      glad you like it :)
      thank you

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  5. Tarun Mazumdar2 June 2012 at 21:28

    Adorable set of haiku... romance is oozing out from each and every one of it... love it!

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    1. NAWAL2 June 2012 at 21:54

      :D tarun i usually consider myself as the "cupid killer," this is an once in a blue moon situation...

      thanku for dropping by :)

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  6. Jaideep Rao2 June 2012 at 22:21

    So many hugs, what should I comment, just a hug bro!

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    1. NAWAL2 June 2012 at 22:30

      Jaideep :P :P :P your comment needs a serious correction! :P

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    2. Jaideep Rao2 June 2012 at 22:36

      I am doing,. apology,. I am sure you'l forgive your bro!

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    3. NAWAL3 June 2012 at 12:03

      :) ofcourse minor mistakes obviously dont matter bro! :)

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  7. Anonymous3 June 2012 at 07:35

    A delightful love haiku. How lovely to be young and in love! *sigh*

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  8. Jaskirancanvas3 June 2012 at 20:22

    a wonderful set.... loved it :)

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  9. Anu ~*~3 June 2012 at 21:42

    Hey ... loved it ..
    wonderful haiku .. :)
    thanks
    Anu
    Way2express

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  10. Neha3 June 2012 at 22:50

    Wonderfully penned :)

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  11. Anonymous4 June 2012 at 01:58

    I like your 3-5-3 one:

    lock away
    loneliness is over
    only love now

    It summarizes your entire post. :)

    Flaming Locks

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    1. NAWAL4 June 2012 at 11:24

      Thank you becca :) glad you liked it :)

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  12. Unknown4 June 2012 at 02:19

    A lovely set of haiku.

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  13. NAWAL4 June 2012 at 11:23

    Thank you loredana :)

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  14. Purple Mist4 June 2012 at 20:20

    So many different interpretations of the word 'lock'! Enjoyed reading them all :)

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    1. NAWAL4 June 2012 at 21:12

      thanks alot I loved my stay at ur blog as well :)

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  15. Junaid shadab4 June 2012 at 21:45

    Feeling expressed well very well written.. you are a really good writer.. and the usual Haiku is the best

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    1. NAWAL5 June 2012 at 23:27

      :P one of my muse has its comment finally posted :) thanks :)

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  16. Junaid shadab4 June 2012 at 21:47

    Feeling expressed well very well written.. you are a really good writer.. and the usual Haiku is the best

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    1. NAWAL5 June 2012 at 23:28

      Oh what do I see!?
      two??!!! love your stay here :) thank you.. :)

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  17. Amber4 June 2012 at 23:47

    lock away
    loneliness is over
    only love now

    My favourite. :)
    The others are good too. :)

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  18. Sara McNulty6 June 2012 at 00:17

    Simply beautiful Haiku. Glad I stopped by.

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    1. NAWAL6 June 2012 at 15:39

      Thank you sara.. :)

      hope you have many delightful stays here :)

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  19. Sanjana 6 June 2012 at 01:50

    pretty pretty :)

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  20. Jaskirancanvas6 June 2012 at 16:35

    lock now, the
    moments we held composed...
    lets freeze it!.......... these are my favorite lines.... its a beautiful set.. and a long one... writing a haiku is a challenge.. you did so wonderfully... with this long set.. kudos to you...

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    1. NAWAL6 June 2012 at 22:31

      :) yes it was a challenge its just been three weeks since i started to write it, its a whole process, absorbing, studying and implementing and I am liking it :)

      Glad you liked it, jaskiran :)

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  21. Pranita8 June 2012 at 13:56

    Wow... beautiful heartfelt attempt!!! And soo long... well done dear...! :)

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    1. NAWAL9 June 2012 at 19:49

      :D my longest attempt :) thank u sooo much pranita :):):) <3<3

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