AWAIT YOUR... SUPPORT!

                                           I PROBE LIFE
                                   CARE, LOVE, DEVOTION,
                                        CLOAKED SUPPORT?

                                      SUPPORT OF FATHER,
                               NURTURES, BUILD  KID FOR LIFE.
                                     ISN'T THAT SUPPORT?

                                                  MOTHERS, LAP
                                         SUPPORT SILENTLY,
                                             REGAIN JOY!

                              

                                 LIFE'S ENDLESS TORMENTS!
                             AWAITS OUTLANDISH SUPPORT
                                   TO HEARTS THAT HANKER.

                                           TRAUMAS GAINED
                              ACHES STILL FRESH! AWAIT                                                                        THAT SUPPORT!! 



                                          LOVE RELATIONS NEAR!!!
                                YET, SOUL I CALL MINE, MISSING!!!
                                              LONG HIS SUPPORT!


P.S- OFTEN IN LIFE WE FIND OUR SELVES ALL ALONE IN THIS WORLD EVEN THOUGH WE HAVE RELATIONS ALL AROUND US, THE ONLY ONE WHO EXISTS IMAGINARILY IN OUR MINDS IS MISSED ALOT... HIS/HER PRESENCE IS LONGED.. THE MOST!
DOSENT MATTER IF EVEN THE WHOLE WORLDS AROUND HE/SHE CLINGS ON OUR SOULS AND MAKES US FEEL THEIR IMPORTENCE :):)

This set of haiku are written for HAIKU HEIGHTS for the prompt this week, SUPPORT :)

Comments

  1. Vinay Leo R.24 June 2012 at 20:42

    Each are quite good examples of support, but I do wonder if it's needed to do so much. I like each tercet of course, Maharukh, it's quite thought out.. but a haiku is meant to say a lot in 17 syllables.. This felt heavy of sorts..

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  2. Mr. Walker24 June 2012 at 22:21

    Like you included fathers and mothers in support. This dad appreciates that. And you tackled needing support too. Nicely done.

    Richard

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  3. Junaid shadab24 June 2012 at 23:03

    Very nicely written :)

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  4. Amrit Sinha24 June 2012 at 23:42

    The family supports us like no one else...very meaningful haiku :-)

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  5. Grace25 June 2012 at 02:05

    Family relationships are the best support system. Agree.

    As to the form, perhaps it's best to focus on a single image or idea and build on it. This is not haiku per se but just a poem of 3 lines per stanza ~

    Happy day to you ~

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  6. Jaideep Rao25 June 2012 at 11:29

    Last one made me wonder of "HIS", sometimes its God, sometimes a friend, sometimes soul. Well done Sis, love you!

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  7. Jaskirancanvas25 June 2012 at 22:03

    amazing set... very true... its beautiful.. u write so wnderfully.. a fan of yours... :)

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  8. Sharp Little Pencil26 June 2012 at 08:41

    Maharukh, this is my first time here, thx for stopping by my blog. You write beautiful verse. The whole "support" theme is upheld by both the images (great) and the words about mothers, fathers... yet, even with all family, there come times when one feels alone, isolated. That's when you also turn to the 'family' you create along the way, who lend a unique form of support. Great stuff, but if you write without all capital letters, it will be even better!! Peace, Amy
    http://sharplittlepencil.com/2012/06/18/an-honor-plus-a-poem-passionate/

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  9. Anu ~*~26 June 2012 at 19:50

    Hey i also write on family support .. very well written
    ..:)
    adorbale haiku maharukh ,,:)

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  10. Pranita26 June 2012 at 21:11

    Very interesting thoughts maharukh... but i think we depend on people so much we forget that we come alone n die alone.. loneliness is just our state of mind... we always have people who love around us! :)
    Black fist of fury!

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  11. Sankara Jayanth S29 June 2012 at 12:51

    A wonderful set. Lovely. And so true. Could relate with each of them. for me, the best lines: "life's endless torment. waits outlandish support, to hearts that hanker".

    Btw, Thank you for stopping by at my blog, now I visited yours and i know i would come back here soon. Keep writing.:)

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  12. Kodjo Deynoo30 June 2012 at 10:42

    I like the fact that you went towards the family way, with this writing

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