WHAT BRINGS CHANGE?

                       The mundane questions,
                       Tickle the curious mind.
                            Nosy kid within...

                       Naively switch world,
                     into congruent state, no
                         ordinary change!!!  


Sometimes the questions which evolve in our brains change the entire definitions of our lives sometimes they cling for a long time and when the answers are revealed we see ourselves standing in a whole new position... Life makes us ask inquisitive questions on almost everything now and then, sometimes I feel my purpose is to fine the answers of questions on my existence over the years my curious mind has asked me... :) 
Still ask questions, they never stop... always has a change with them :)  ORDINARY OR EXTRAORDINARY!!!!

The post was written for haiku heights the prompt for this week is "ORDINARY"

 
 


Comments

  1. Vinay Leo R.9 June 2012 at 19:55

    I like the thought, I honestly do, and I do relate. My neighbor has the most adorable 2 year old, and she asks the most simplest of questions and her mind changes with the wind. She's as curious as a kitten and makes me smile with her innocence. I don't find her curiousity ordinary at all!

    I however wonder if the last haiku could've been reworded someway.. the heaviness of the word congruent seems to take away from the light-hearted nature of your thought.

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    1. NAWAL9 June 2012 at 20:20

      I used "congruent" to describe how innocence settles with the answers :)

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  2. joanne9 June 2012 at 20:27

    kids are so real, so honest, so curious...we could all benefit by their example....my mind flutterers from topic to topic, too, and I frequently feel like a child....in a good way....
    nice photo and haiku....thanx

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    1. NAWAL10 June 2012 at 23:03

      I feel myself curious too... :)
      Thank you joanne :)

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  3. Grace9 June 2012 at 20:40

    Curiosity brings the change ~ I like your thoughts too ~

    The most effective haiku is one that is simple yet captures the moment. If I may suggest:

    The mundane questions,
    tickle the curious mind, like
    kitten scratching ball

    cocooned butterfly
    emerges in garden, no
    ordinary change!!!

    Happy day to you ~

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    1. NAWAL10 June 2012 at 23:04

      thanks you grace yeah you actually showed me what might have made it much better :) will keep in mind next time :)

      Thanks again :)

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  4. Ramesh Sood9 June 2012 at 21:19

    Well done Maharukh...the interventions here show that you have generated so much interest.. and noooooooooo the prompt for me too was a surprise from Leo...look at what he says at HH..

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    1. NAWAL10 June 2012 at 23:05

      Thank you RS sir!
      i thought it was given by you nevertheless your was marvelous :):)

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  5. Tarang Sinha9 June 2012 at 21:47

    Nice take on the prompt!:)

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  6. Adura Ojo9 June 2012 at 22:16

    That nosy kid can have a lot of common sense too - ordinary and often undervalued:)

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    1. NAWAL10 June 2012 at 23:06

      definitely has and hence is curious :)

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  7. Pranita9 June 2012 at 22:20

    Wow.. this is a very thought provoking haiku... It's true.. sometimes when we ponder over lil questions, the answers indeed befuddle us smtyms! Very well said... Brilliant!
    :)

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    1. NAWAL10 June 2012 at 23:07

      sometimes change is just a moment far... as soon as we get the answers... we see a whole new picture :)

      thank you Pranita :)

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  8. Sri Valli10 June 2012 at 17:55

    Very beautiful and cheerful haiku....Made me smile :)

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  9. carol l mckenna10 June 2012 at 18:10

    ...mundane questions tickle the curious mind ~ wonderful ~ ordinary all part of metamorphisis ~ fun photo and excellent haiku ~ thanks, ^_^ (A Creative Harbor)

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  10. Junaid shadab10 June 2012 at 20:29

    Very well written. Really liked it. :)

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  11. kaykuala10 June 2012 at 20:31

    Children can look so ordinary through their innocence. They'll show how extraordinary each of them are the moment they start to interact. Great write Maharukh!

    Hank

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    1. NAWAL10 June 2012 at 23:09

      yes I second that Hank they have a super exciting world built withing themselves...

      thanks hank!

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  12. Anonymous10 June 2012 at 22:06

    The mundane questions,
    Tickle the curious mind.

    I like this, and it conjures many images. I think the second part is too heavy to the first part of lightheartedness ... I understand what you are saying, but it throws the rhythm of the Haiku off.

    Thank you for your visit. :) Have an awesome week!

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    1. NAWAL10 June 2012 at 23:10

      yes Becca I now realize its a lil too contrasting :) I will keep in mind next time :) insha allah :)

      same to you becca :)
      Thanks for the compliment and suggestions :)

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  13. blogfia11 June 2012 at 03:04

    Clever done! I think children's questions are extraordinary exciting :)

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    1. NAWAL11 June 2012 at 13:59

      They are extraordinary themselves :)

      thanks blogfia :)

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  14. Jaideep Rao11 June 2012 at 11:09

    This is extraordinary stuff!.I hope you keep getting "inquisitive questions on almost everything" so that we get to read extraordinary things!. Love you sis:)

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    1. NAWAL11 June 2012 at 13:59

      awwweee such a sweet comment bro! you made my day hope I make you delighted in the coming times as well.. :):) ^_^

      Thank you so much Jaideep :)

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  15. rallentanda11 June 2012 at 16:52

    If you stop asking the questions,you've got a problem:)

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  16. Anu ~*~12 June 2012 at 19:18

    Beautiful haiku ...
    ordinary view

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  17. NAWAL13 June 2012 at 12:36

    Thank you loredana :)

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  18. Iris13 June 2012 at 21:26

    I like your post Maharukh and I am your new follower.
    Best regards, Iris

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    1. NAWAL14 June 2012 at 00:08

      Thank you so much Iris :) I'm overwhelmed by your gesture :)

      Thanks again! :)

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  19. Paulog3015 June 2012 at 22:18

    Excellent write, loved the first part best. Those little subtle occurrences are like magic for the young.

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