Saturday, June 02, 2012

MOMENT I SEE YOU :)

heart exults,
tears run along cheek,
endless bliss!!

engulf me
in your ardor, her
eyes twinkled!!!


can he span again???
hearts still held the immortal
love for each other..

commiseration,
at-last found supreme rest in
your perfect embrace!

teary,joyous eyes
pray with out a sound, to LOCK
moments forever!


Lock away the sorrow,
which dwelled in secluded times,
Lock souls in love now.

lock away,
loneliness is over
only love now!

lock now, the
moments we held composed...
lets freeze it!

he said nothing yet
she understood, memories spun
in single moment...

LOCKED FOR LIFETIME!!!!

P.S- tooo huggilicious today :9 missing my dear friends my best friends alot whose hugs are the safest place for me :) If you are reading this I am sure you can understand it :) LOVE YOU ALL :*:* 

P.P.S- This set of haiku, which are my longest till date were written for haiku heights, the promt given this week was LOCK !:)

44 comments:

  1. Interesting set of haiku.. I personally prefer one or two that stand on their own, and express beautifully :)

    I found that one in your set:

    lock away,
    loneliness is over
    only love now!

    That's quite expressive and could mean either a kiss or a hug.. the former romantic, and the latter could be any kind of love.. :)

    Thanks for sharing!

    P.S: Please could you disable the word verification? It's a turn-off when people come to comment. :)

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    1. thanks leo :):)

      well i wanted people to have their own imagination when they read this :) thanks again ur comments are mostly scary to me as i feel as verdicts gonna pass :D :D
      YOU ARE WELCOMED ANYHOW :)

      yes surely i will turn it off..

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  2. Wonderful set of 'love' haiku ~ your spirit overflows with love ~ thanks, ^_^

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    1. :) :) :) thank u carol :)
      glad you enjoyed them!

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  3. Through your haiku and photo, I feel you are open and enthusiastic and loving....I like it!

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    1. You guessed it right joanne.. :)
      glad you like it :)
      thank you

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  4. Adorable set of haiku... romance is oozing out from each and every one of it... love it!

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    1. :D tarun i usually consider myself as the "cupid killer," this is an once in a blue moon situation...

      thanku for dropping by :)

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  5. So many hugs, what should I comment, just a hug bro!

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    1. Jaideep :P :P :P your comment needs a serious correction! :P

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    2. I am doing,. apology,. I am sure you'l forgive your bro!

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    3. :) ofcourse minor mistakes obviously dont matter bro! :)

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  6. A delightful love haiku. How lovely to be young and in love! *sigh*

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  7. a wonderful set.... loved it :)

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  8. Hey ... loved it ..
    wonderful haiku .. :)
    thanks
    Anu
    Way2express

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    1. Thank anu for the compliment :)

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  9. I like your 3-5-3 one:

    lock away
    loneliness is over
    only love now


    It summarizes your entire post. :)

    Flaming Locks

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    1. Thank you becca :) glad you liked it :)

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  10. Very sweet haiku. The first two are my favorites :)

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  11. So many different interpretations of the word 'lock'! Enjoyed reading them all :)

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    1. thanks alot I loved my stay at ur blog as well :)

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  12. Feeling expressed well very well written.. you are a really good writer.. and the usual Haiku is the best

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    1. :P one of my muse has its comment finally posted :) thanks :)

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  13. Feeling expressed well very well written.. you are a really good writer.. and the usual Haiku is the best

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    1. Oh what do I see!?
      two??!!! love your stay here :) thank you.. :)

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  14. lock away
    loneliness is over
    only love now

    My favourite. :)
    The others are good too. :)

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  15. Simply beautiful Haiku. Glad I stopped by.

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    1. Thank you sara.. :)

      hope you have many delightful stays here :)

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  16. lock now, the
    moments we held composed...
    lets freeze it!.......... these are my favorite lines.... its a beautiful set.. and a long one... writing a haiku is a challenge.. you did so wonderfully... with this long set.. kudos to you...

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    1. :) yes it was a challenge its just been three weeks since i started to write it, its a whole process, absorbing, studying and implementing and I am liking it :)

      Glad you liked it, jaskiran :)

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  17. Wow... beautiful heartfelt attempt!!! And soo long... well done dear...! :)

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    1. :D my longest attempt :) thank u sooo much pranita :):):) <3<3

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