Saturday, June 16, 2012

PRICE OF WISDOM...

                                  ACHES SHAKE MY TASTE BUDS!
                                PRICELESS! ABSOLUTE JAW GAIN, :)
                                      UPSURGED WISDOM TOOTH!!

I was very excited always about the fact of wisdom tooth's arrival :) when suddenly now they have started erupting I realize there's alot of pain.. Surely NO pain No gain :)


                                       WITH AGE COMES WISDOM
                           LESSONS LEARNT FROM LIFE, SCENIC!
                                  AMEND US MANY WAYS :)

A famous saying yet so true how ever immature a person looks like it just a way he or she might have accepted the trails of life.. Change is the constant thing, life gifts us every now and then.. :)  

The above haiku are written for HAIKU HEIGHTS the prompt this  week is WISDOM

37 comments:

  1. Your take on the theme of wisdom in the first poem is interesting. Frankly, the tooth of wisdom didn't occur to me:)). I thought of the inner wisdom gained through observing nature which you called:(LESSONS LEARNT FROM LIFE, SCENIC!). I like the philosophic touch in your poems and in the blog as a whole, especially the statement:(I AM BORN TO RULE AND NOT TO BE RULED).

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    1. Thanks rita :) wisdom tooth were my obsession till last year when I used to think all my childish looks will vanish into thin air once they arrive.. (nothing as such happen :D)

      My statement is because I feel I have my own space or world in this universe and have the ability to rule either way I like :)

      Thanks again :)

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  2. "With age comes wisdom"

    Sometimes. Sometimes not. I've met some very foolish old people in my day...

    Gathering Wisdom

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    1. I am sure those are rare cases :)

      Thanks for sharing! :)

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  3. @ Maharukh: Nice take on the prompt!:)

    @ MMT: :)

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  4. Interesting take on prompt and rather reflective too. ~thanks, ^_^ (A Creative Harbor)

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    1. You are welcome Carol :)
      glad you liked it :)

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  5. Argh, wisdom teeth can be very painful! I had one growing the wrong way a few months ago and the pain distracted me from everything. Couldn't even focus on revision for my exams.

    I guess it is figurative in a way- that no wisdom comes without a price :)

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    1. luckily for me jnana it didn't grew in the opposite direction but stops every time then starts to grow after two three months.. that's soo irritating! and if god forbid by mistake I eat from that tooth side its the end of world type pain!

      I truly can understand your feelings.. :)

      Thanks for sharing :)

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  6. wisdom teeth? great take on prompt....your second haiku - I agree that wisdom CAN come with age espec. if one learns from experience...well-done

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    1. Definitely Joanne nothing happens if we don't want it to happen :)

      Thanks Joanne :)

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  7. I like the use of wisdom tooth ~ Cheers ~

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  8. Love the upsurged wisdom tooth -- thanks for the painless smile

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  9. Thats well said, second haiku did the trick, yeah, it comes with age, wisdom, sounds serious right ;),but when it comes be as you are sis :)

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    1. A lil trait of varieties in my personality with time is all I will gain and my character my ideologies will all remain same :)

      Thanks bro for the lovely comment :)

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  10. Hehe. congos over the wisdom tooth :P was pleasantly surprised to see such a different take on wisdom :)
    and yes... the lessons we learn in life do make us a bit more wiser :)

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    1. Thank you kirti :)
      They have started erupting and thats what struck me first when I saw the prompt :)

      Glad you liked it :)

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  11. Why are they called wisdom teeth? Oh now you have me worrying:)

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    1. Rallentanda, they are Wisdom teeth cause they erupt after 16 where immaturity starts usually decreasing and people start becoming wiser :)

      Dont you worry Just wear your best smile :)

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  12. Lovely take on the prompt....Wisdom comes with experiences faced in life....Very true and beautiful haiku!

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  13. Very nice take on the prompt, MAHARUKH. Most of us are thinking only learned wisdom but you included the teeth which are associated with having wisdom. And added some humor. Thank you.
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    BTW, I have one wisdom tooth that has never surfaced. The dentistis say just to leave it be there, buried. The others have been pulled when they began to decay.
    ..

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    1. Thank you Jim :)

      That sounds really painful mine erupt then pause then erupt its the same case from last three months now :)

      Thanks for sharing :)

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  14. Thats wisdom tooth part was real good..
    I hv nt yet gotten one...
    Though i am nt very ready to endure the pain

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    1. time teaches us everything :)

      good luck and thanks :)

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  15. my wisdom tooth came this month and damn it hurts! lovely haiku set...
    I like the second one.. age teaches us a lot...

    http://chaigaramchai.blogspot.in/2012/06/wisdom-haiku-june-18-2012.html

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    1. Mine is still hurting Tarun :)

      thanks for your stay :)

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  16. OHHHHHHH ...Price of widomm ..
    .. Good one Maharuth :)

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  17. wisdom come with time,, and experiences teaches us alot..:)

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  18. Ouch, your wisdom tooth took me back in time to mine.

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  19. I like your two takes on wisdom. And I agree that wisdom can "amend us many ways".

    Richard

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  20. It has both wisdom tooth and the general wisdom nice way to write

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